QUOTE (matto_uk @ May 24 2008, 03:33 PM)

test test test
Capitalization: F
Punctuation: F
Brevity: D
Plot: D-
Your post seems to be inspired by authors such as Hemmingway, but it has an extremely weak plot and lacks originality. The editors would suggest that you introduce interesting characters and a background as you gradually unfold the story. We look forward to seeing new and interesting manuscripts from this up-and-coming author.