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matto_uk
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Digs
QUOTE (matto_uk @ May 24 2008, 03:33 PM) *
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Capitalization: F
Punctuation: F
Brevity: D
Plot: D-

Your post seems to be inspired by authors such as Hemmingway, but it has an extremely weak plot and lacks originality. The editors would suggest that you introduce interesting characters and a background as you gradually unfold the story. We look forward to seeing new and interesting manuscripts from this up-and-coming author.
Upward
When is the next novel due for its release?
Griptool
QUOTE (matto_uk @ May 24 2008, 03:33 PM) *
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Got a compelling protagonist? Gonna send him on a journey of self discovery? - Maybe some relationship issues, you know enemy's become friends - friends become enemy's - Add in a love interest to give the reader a more fulfilling experience. Oh and don't forget a few tasteful sex scenes to really make the final 200 pages fly by laugh.gif

(Homage to Stewie Griffin)
Loggy
Is this another one of those ignore threads ?, I ignored the other one but just cant do it this time, sorry. rolleyes.gif
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